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January 26, 2011

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Celox – Stop Bleeding

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Celox - Stops Bleeding - Startup Featured on Startuplift

Celox stops Bleeding fast in all cases.

Target Audience: Anyone who may bleed ( everyone).
Website URL: http://www.celoxsales.com/


Feedback sought:

  • When you first visit the site, is it immediately clear what it is about?
  • Is the site easy to use?
  • Does it answer your questions?
  • Please comment on various elements of the site. What do you like? What bothers you?
  • Is the video engaging?
  • Are you inclined to buy our product? Why?
  • Please share any other thoughts or comments you might have.

About Celox:

Celox is the greatest product to stop bleeding ever invented. It is FDA approved, it works 100% of the time even on people who take Blood Thinners. It comes in a powder, a gauze and a specially shaped nose bleed(great for people with Von Willabrand disease). There are no side effects, no allergic reaction, no burning . This product is used by the military and hospitals.

3 Awards. $5 Each. No Awards Remaining.

       
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    tthau2010
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    When you first visit the site, is it immediately clear what it is about? When i first visit, i get…
     

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    Feedback sought:   When you first visit the site, is it immediately clear what it is…
     

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    ccondry2
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    When you first visit the site, is it immediately clear what it is about? During the first few…
     

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    Final Thoughts and Actionable suggestions: Your first impression on the homepage needs to be improved: First, I…
     

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    mustangsally105
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    Feedback sought:   When you first visit the site, is it immediately clear what it is…
     

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    Portee4Star
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    Jan 30 2011
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    When you first visit the site, is it immediately clear what it is about? The site was immediately informative…
     

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    JudahFirst
    Jan 30 2011
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    Feedback sought:

    When you first visit the site, is it immediately clear what it is about?

    The large logo is perfect for letting the surfer know exactly what this site is about quickly – stopping bleeding. I find the red on white to be a real page-popper for this site. Loved the red band across the front that looks like little platelets floating around. As I scrolled down the page I immediately thought of easily portable first-aid kits. The long box near the bottom explaining how Celox works was extremely helpful and let me know that this was not a site where offering only band aids, but that this is a new product that actually promotes clotting. I would recommend moving that box to the top of the page, however.
    I do not like having a voice-over talking to me when I visit a site. To make matters worse, I could not get the “turn intro on/off” link to work, so my only option was the mute button. I recommend putting the link to turn off the sound at the TOP of the page (more prominently, maybe with one of those little speaker icons) and then make it work.

    Is the site easy to use?

    The clear tabs at the top with their pull-down menus made navigation a breeze.

    Does it answer your questions?

    The only question I could not find the answer to was regarding side-effects. When I researched Chitosan on other sites I did find that the only known side-effect would be if the user were allergic to shellfish. Other than that, the many pages of well-organized reading material answered everything else.

    Please comment on various elements of the site. What do you like? What bothers you?

    I loved the pull-down menus and sidebars; the layout of the pages made the wealth of information digestible instead of leaving me feeling overwhelmed.
    I didn’t particularly like the “buy online” page. I felt that the register/login links could have been more prominent and perhaps in their own little boxes (I also didn’t like that those links were repeated on the page – in a top menu and also after the “welcome.”). The login page itself I felt was a bit crowded and small – there was plenty of space on the page, so I’m not sure why the text is so small. The create an account page was fine.
    The “browse by category” sidebar is great. All of the individual product pages were okay, but I was missing the red platelet bar that was at the top of the other pages. You could make that smaller on the product pages, but I think it helps the information to “pop.” In fact, I would use the same type of menu bar across the top of the product pages, just with different tabs (I like the tab size on the product pages) to keep the continuity of the site. Somehow the grayish blue bar and changed font didn’t do anything for me.
    I always like to see a security seal on a purchase page. Easy to find on your site which was nice. Glad to see the lock at the bottom on the sign-up page as well (some sites only have the lock on the payment page).

    Is the video engaging?

    I’m not a fan of the video. You spent too much time saying that Celox saves lives (and trying to convince me I need it) before saying what it actually does (helps blood clot). Whenever a product promotion keeps pushing my need for it before telling me what it does I feel like I’m being manipulated. Even though it was easy to find what Celox does, I had to look for it, and that information should have come closer to the start of the video rather than 1/2-way through.
    I didn’t like the change in voice-over from man to woman and the video was too long overall. I can’t imagine what would have happened if I’d wanted to watch the video before the intro was over…

    Are you inclined to buy our product? Why?

    Actually, I do plan to buy the product now that I know about it. My son suffers frequent nose bleeds and this will be a wonderful fix for that. Also, my dad is on coumadin, so this could be a lifesaver for him.

    Please share any other thoughts or comments you might have.

    Although I did not read all of the text on the various pages, there are a couple of grammatical errors in the paragraph under the video. (Its should read It’s and the last sentence is a fragment. Also, the word “instinctive” seemed odd to me.) My point in bringing that up is that I tend not to trust sites which display text that is grammatically incorrect. I believe there is no excuse for that kind of thing on the internet. If a company doesn’t care enough about English grammar in their product presentation to hire a good proofreader, then I am skeptical about purchasing from that site. Things like that definitely affect consumers.
    Finally, I liked all of the link boxes on the left side, except the Dr. Greene box took me to a completely different site. I was thinking maybe he had something to do with Celox’s development, but I found myself looking at a pediatric site and couldn’t really figure out the relationship. If you must have it on the site, I would put it somewhere else and make it clear where it’s going to take the surfer.

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    jjhcrt1017
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    Winnie
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    When you first visit the site, is it immediately clear what it is about? It's…
     

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    Another thing to note: Part of the confusion on your homepage is that the far left column…
     

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    Jan 30 2011
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    When you first visit the site, is it immediately clear what it is about? Yes, the site appears to be about a product that will help to immediately stop the flow of blood, something similar to the body’s own clotting mechanism.
     
    Is the site easy to use? The site is very easy to navigate around, appears to be very user friendly.
     
    Does it answer your questions? The site tells me what the product is about, how it works, and the history of the product.    It tells me in what forms the product is available, such as guaze, nostril plugs, and granules.   It contains media reviews,photos, a Contact Us and About Us tab.    Also, as mentioned above, I did think the process of the product was similar to the normal blood clotting process, however, it does tell me that it only clots the blood that it immediately comes in contact with.  It also tells me the mode of this action and the benefits.
     
    Please comment on various elements of the site. What do you like? What bothers you? First I would like to see the How Celox Works box at the top of the screen, so I can see the process immediately.  I would also like to see a FAQ tab at the top of the page instead of under the Technology tab.  (It should have it’s own tab).   I like the Photo Gallery, so that I can truly see the results of this product.  I also really like the home page of this website as well as the header of this website.    I like the plasma look under the Bleeding Stops with Celox!  It really is eye catching, bright and well put together.  This is truly an amazing product!  Nothing about this website bothers me other than what I have mentioned above.
     
    Is the video engaging? Absolutely!
     
    Are you inclined to buy our product? Why? Absolutey!  As a certified EMT, I carry a jump bag in my car at all times.  This is definitely a product that I want to add to my bag.  I have to say that I am absolutely amazed to see that this product will help with my Coumadin and Heperin patients!    At $32.99 for a 10 pack of granules, it’s very reasonable priced.  Very competitive to any other product I carry in my bag!
     
    Please share any other thoughts or comments you might have.  



    Product: I am very excited to pass this website and product on to my friends and colleagues!   It’s definitely something I believe in 100%.  It’s something that I will buy for home, car and work!
    Website: All pages of the website open both quickly and without incident.  They load fast.  The video opens quickly and runs smoothly.  It is a very informative video!    The colors of the website are very appealing, very easy on the eyes.    The size of the font and colors all work very well with the overall theme.    I do not find any broken links in this website.    I can easily ascertain what the overall basis of this website is all about.    The information was achieved effortlessly!
     

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    Latasha
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    mcassady
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    * When you first visit the site, is it immediately clear what it is about? * Is the…
     

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    StartUpLift
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    StartUpLift
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    StartUpLift
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    $5 awarded to ccondry2.
     

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